An excellent draft. Please think about how you could re-phrase the tagline so that it is grammatically correct.
Your change to the critical acclaim quote is improved. Please add some punctuation after "Unmissable" - it is a small but important detail.
Thank you for the feedback, Sir. I have amended the changes.
An excellent draft. Please think about how you could re-phrase the tagline so that it is grammatically correct.
ReplyDeleteYour change to the critical acclaim quote is improved. Please add some punctuation after "Unmissable" - it is a small but important detail.
ReplyDeleteThank you for the feedback, Sir. I have amended the changes.
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