You show an excellent grasp of design and layout conventions and use a really well lit photograph. You need to ensure all language is grammatically correct (the strapline and the headline) and all sell lines are consistently aligned.
A noticeable improvement - well done. A few small details still need tweaking - the grammar of the magazine strapline ("of" rather than "on) and the font alignment of the DiCaprio sell line (and use of lower case "i" in his surname).
You show an excellent grasp of design and layout conventions and use a really well lit photograph. You need to ensure all language is grammatically correct (the strapline and the headline) and all sell lines are consistently aligned.
ReplyDeleteA noticeable improvement - well done. A few small details still need tweaking - the grammar of the magazine strapline ("of" rather than "on) and the font alignment of the DiCaprio sell line (and use of lower case "i" in his surname).
ReplyDeleteI appreciate the feedback you have given and have altered some changes to improve my magazine.
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